Crooked Rose and the CIA--episode 1
You know what? all of you can get over it, i am starting a series!
“Falcon to Crooked Rose, do you copy?” a voice asked from the ear piece. A tall man with short black hair sauntered through a crowd of rich looking individuals and seized a glass of champagne from a servant’s tray. “Copy, target is in sight” the young man whispered. He smiled at a passing lady and looked back at an older man. “Alright, his office is upstairs, but there are four guards guarding the entry”
“Don’t worry, Raven will take care of them” Crooked Rose said. He walked past the crowd and stood at the base of the stairs. Suddenly, from the front door came a beautiful woman. She walked in like she owned the place. Her long black dress and beautifully swaying auburn hair were intoxicating. Men stole a glance at her as she walked passed the crowd. She was, for lack of a better term, hot. Crooked Rose grinned, “Always has to have a good entry.” She walked up and put her back to Crooked Rose. “Occupy Hendry while I take out the guards” she whispered. Crooked Rose walked past and tapped the old man on the soldier. “Mr. Hendry, can we talk?” The old man stopped talking with the other folk and turned completely around. “I just want to say that I am a big fan of your collection. I have admired the Deraldo paintings for many years”
“Why, thank you. I have been collecting the for many decades”
“My name is George Anderson by the way.”
Raven walked up the stairs and passed two men guarding the door. She stepped into the bathroom and started to rummage through her purse. “Two of the guards left to talk with some VIP”
“I guess we should have seen that coming” she said and pulled out some lipstick. “Don’t get any on you or you will be out cold for hours.” She unscrewed the bottom and carefully put a plastic covering on her bottom lip. She put her purse in the trash and walked back out. The two guards watched as she walked up to them. She bumped into them. “Oh, I wasn’t aware that guards had such big muscles” she said and kissed one. The other stood in shock at the sudden jump on. Suddenly, the guard fell unconscious and she kicked the other in the bottom jaw. She looked around and no one saw. Dragging the two bodies into the room was no trouble; it was cracking the safe that was a bit difficult. She took out various pointed objects and started cracking the safe. After a couple of minutes the door swung ajar and she dropped her utensils. “Falcon…we have a problem”…

6 Comments:
Wow Will, various pointed objects eh? About how big were these objects? Do they resemble human teeth? Just wondering...I think I can solve this mystery.
Really, Will, that was awesome, as usual. ;) Your writing skills have really been growing, I've noticed, and gaining a certain depth to them. I look forward with great anticipation to more of your literary marvels! ...yeah.
very cool story! i can't wait to see what happens! reminds me a bit of ALIAS.
Actually, ALIAS inspired me:)
Considering hopw much i LOVE that show!
Hehe cool, I quite like it, yes it definitely has a few touches of ALIAS to it. Good job writing, Will, and now I'm dying to wonder whats gonna happen next!
KEEP WRITING!!! AHHH!!
~Becky~
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